The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/09
I enjoyed your well written story. It's wonderful to see how the Lord used you to reach many once you surrendered to Him. Good job.
12/10/09
I'm sitting here humming the little color book song we used to sing in Sunday School. I think you needed to explain more that the thought of the little girl who gave it to you made it beautiful. In my mind I'm seeing plastic beads and a mix of colors that doesn't really go with anything. It's not ugly but a more powerful message might've come out if you emphasized it's simplicity. As a mom I have a few of those Sunday School/ Scout meeting craft bracelets.
12/11/09
Wow! I have goosebumps. Thanks for sharing that.
12/11/09
Loved your final image, "sharing her faith with painted seeds" , wonderful story of the gift of faith which goes on and on...
01/11/10
Oh this is lovely, lovely, lovely! Congratulations on placing in your level and making the top 40! Have you seen the Writing Challenge Forums?