The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your well written story. It's wonderful to see how the Lord used you to reach many once you surrendered to Him. Good job.
I'm sitting here humming the little color book song we used to sing in Sunday School. I think you needed to explain more that the thought of the little girl who gave it to you made it beautiful. In my mind I'm seeing plastic beads and a mix of colors that doesn't really go with anything. It's not ugly but a more powerful message might've come out if you emphasized it's simplicity. As a mom I have a few of those Sunday School/ Scout meeting craft bracelets.
Wow! I have goosebumps. Thanks for sharing that.
Loved your final image, "sharing her faith with painted seeds" , wonderful story of the gift of faith which goes on and on...
Oh this is lovely, lovely, lovely! Congratulations on placing in your level and making the top 40! Have you seen the Writing Challenge Forums?