The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful piece. This was not just excellent writing but an experience. You drew the reader in to the calm of the little girl's world "masterfully" and showed the trouble as well, instead of writing just a syrupy piece. Raves!
A lovely flight of fancy. Very nice.
AWWWW, poor little girl.
Kind of reminds me of the story of "Hinds Feet on High Places" where the main character received special stones for each of her learning points.

Beautiful! Hope this is a winner for you.
Very engaging. Wonderfully written. Well done.
How I connected with this little girl and her imaginary world . . . your descriptions were just right and your writing style is one I can relate to and appreciate!
Beautiful writing--so much said in between the lines