The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very well-written account of what had to be a very frightening day.
Very well written! I lived through a day like that in San Bernardino many years ago when over 400 homes burned. It was indeed a black day!
Creative writing with this tragic story. You've written it perfectly for this topic. I like the contradition in the title and within your story.
This is sooooo good! I love your word carpentry, i.e.
"The bright, white light of hope found its voice again."
Beautiful, just beautiful! And word pictures like this are found all throughout the story. Good for you! Kudos!
Interesting, keep writing.
Congratulations on your win. Well-deserved because of your stark imagery and your economical use of words.