The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/05
I'm surprised no one has commented on this! Great job comparing luggage to our bodies of death and the freedom of Christ and his Holy Spirit. I, too, have thought the same thing - can't wait to be rescued from this body of death someday!
08/25/05
Adam's curse passed on to us needn't make us afraid. Your poem, a splendid one, shows us we have the Holy Spirit to guide and comfort us.
08/28/05
Amen!

Beautifully expressed.
08/28/05
Wonderful take on the topic and beautifully expressed.
I enjoyed reading this. Good job!