The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/09
Very creative...it was so vivid, I could see it all in my mind's eye. I'm a landlubber, but definitely was taken in by the dialect and descriptions.
12/11/09
Great snippit. Loved the descriptions, and they didn't even slow down the action. This is not easy to do. I bet there's a novel writer within you just waiting to come out and play.
Excellent descriptions! I could easily see this story in my mind's eye. I couldn't help thinking of Pirates of the Carribean. Well done!