The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/09
Very well done! The old song, "Don't it make my brown eyes blue" comes to mind.
12/03/09
I knew I had a question and had to go back and re-read. Why only one sad eye? Yes, it rhymes better with die but this world probably has both eyes crying.
very creative. Moving. Loved it.
12/04/09
The ending was kind of abrupt, needs some polishing but otherwise not bad.
12/08/09
This just seems like it comes straight from the heart. It's clear and quite expressive; I enjoyed it.
01/14/10
Nicely done...I can see those precious brown eyes crying for His children.