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Great story! I just got back from a trip where roosters would crow all night your story was extremely timely. Loved it!
loved it!
Very good, I liked it!
Good story and dialog with a fitting title and ending. Good writing.
So one fowl's deed prevented another's foul deed! Ir recalled for me an angry Rhode Island Red rooster we had when I was a kid, but I don't know if I should thank you for provoking this memory.
Good energetic mix of drama and fun, but you need to be aware that gypsies invented apostrophes. This shows up when we see them riding on plurals instead of the possessives they should be travelling on. Otherwise very entertaining stuff!