The Official Writing Challenge
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This totally does me in. Your Maire is perhaps one of the best characters ever. Every word gripped, so good.
Wow. This is an intense story. Great writing.
One of the best I have read this week. Great writing.
You stir a lot of emotion in your reader with this expertly written story. You're a master at showing and not telling. Great work!
This is extremely well done (although unfortunately my sharp eye stumbled over misspellings...sorry). I do like the way you put words together: you've drawn your characters well and kept the suspense going. Good job!
you say so much in so few words. love the characters.
Gripping beginning leading into a riveting story...excellent characterization, too.
I was itching just reading about that horrid garment!
I have read this several times. It is just brilliant. Very gripping, incredibly sad, an amazing piece of writing.
Great on topic writing that held my interest throughout.
Wow. Speechless. (shocker, I know) Well done. Wow.
You beat everything, you know that? Just when I think you've written the best thing ever, you come up with this. Bring out the marching band because this one is going to win. BIG TIME! Kudos!!
I agree with Jan, Your characters are marvelous. Perhaps this can become part of a great novel for you! Blessings to you, ruth
OOOOOH, GOOD one! Note the capital letters, lol! What a great story, I was totally drawn in and I loved the twist and change in atmosphere and character. I love Marie--it was awesome. ^_^
I loved Maire from the very beginning and your wonderful story to the very end.