The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/09
This totally does me in. Your Maire is perhaps one of the best characters ever. Every word gripped me...so, so good.
12/05/09
Wow. This is an intense story. Great writing.
One of the best I have read this week. Great writing.
12/07/09
You stir a lot of emotion in your reader with this expertly written story. You're a master at showing and not telling. Great work!
12/08/09
This is extremely well done (although unfortunately my sharp eye stumbled over misspellings...sorry). I do like the way you put words together: you've drawn your characters well and kept the suspense going. Good job!
12/08/09
you say so much in so few words. love the characters.
Gripping beginning leading into a riveting story...excellent characterization, too.
I was itching just reading about that horrid garment!
12/08/09
I have read this several times. It is just brilliant. Very gripping, incredibly sad, an amazing piece of writing.
Great on topic writing that held my interest throughout.
12/08/09
Wow. ummmm...wow. Speechless. (shocker, I know) Well done. Wow.
12/09/09
Amazing!
You beat everything, you know that? Just when I think you've written the best thing ever, you come up with this. Bring out the marching band because this one is going to win. BIG TIME! Kudos!!
12/09/09
I agree with Jan, Your characters are marvelous. Perhaps this can become part of a great novel for you! Blessings to you, ruth
12/09/09
OOOOOH, GOOD one! Note the capital letters, lol! What a great story, I was totally drawn in and I loved the twist and change in atmosphere and character. I love Marie--it was awesome. ^_^
I loved Maire from the very beginning and your wonderful story to the very end.