The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/05
This is really good. Someone else's joy actually made you feel better. Excellent writing.
I enjoyed this. Particularly liked the way you introduced physical luggage first then spiritual and emotional luggage later. Great work!
This tied together well and kept my interest. Good last line!
08/28/05
Lovely interweaving of luggage themes!