The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/09
I liked this, and think he might have had such thoughts, what a wonder to be brought to live in David's court. I would have liked to hear his own thoughts though. Good writing.
12/07/09
Very good.
12/09/09
Quite a challenge to write in first person present but you did it well.

Excellent character study.
12/09/09
I've always loved the compassion shown in the verse you quote at the beginning. I LOVE how you told this story. It's so rich with Biblical history. It just reminds me of what Christ did for us… lost in our brown world, and He offered us a place in His world. This is great work!