The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/09
Ahh to write like that, I would love to hear more from Calloway Brown,
12/04/09
Warmth and depth well depicted, but breaks between the stanzas would allow more time for reflection, so its impact could be stronger.
12/07/09
Great work on this villanelle! I like how you worked in Calloway Brown's redemption. (and what a creative name!).
12/08/09
Really well done! Wonderful word pictures here. Seems like it should be set to music.
12/08/09
I'd love to live in your brain for a day or two! This is astounding...
12/09/09
Such an intriguing imagination -- what a vivid scene.
12/10/09
Very good, showed real depth. (And no I am not related to the writer).