The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story, beginning with your title! I enjoyed the tie-in with the children's chorus (especially your altered lyrics :) ).
A good fun take on the persistence of a posiitve attitude. Though I imagine that "indoor pluming" could be more ticklish than indoor plumbing.
Cute story, with rapid pacing that was fun to read.

Do people really talk like this? And there was one place where I lost track of the speakers (toward the middle), and one girl seemed to say what the other girl would have.

The girls' relationship is fun and endearing.
Fun story! How bold of you to refer to poop!