The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/09
I'm ready to find that old dirt path now. It sounds wonderful!
12/09/09
Isn't nature GREAT? I especially like your descriptions coming alive with imagery. The repetition of stanzas is also effective and makes me want to find my own dirt path!
12/11/09
I enjoyed the allusion to "Alice in Wonderland"-- Perfect for exploring. I can see everything vividly on this exploration. All your descriptions of "brown" are beautiful. This poem is very creatively done with its repeated stanzas. Very nice work!