The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/09
I like it. Not sure I get it but give my coffee a chance to kick in. One little typo at the end. "She looks up SEE him watching" of course should be sees (ironically like the famous candy.) Good job with the descriptions.
A very playful story. I could just see this couple engaging in their role-plays to serve their desire for romance. I enjoyed your espionage-like style.