The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/09
From one chocolate lover to another, loved your poem, made my mouth water!
12/04/09
Every person in FW is going to relate to your entry! :-) I could just taste it, as I read each description and I finally gave in and went to my stash and got a piece of Russell Stover chocolate covered coconut! I should have written about chocolate exclusively. There's no way you can not win with this entry! Big time Kudos!
12/04/09
I smiled at "rocky road rocks my day" and "chocolate is my favorite color" so very clever. Great work on this!
12/06/09
So do I. I also adore your poem. Good job.
12/08/09
Wait...I'm not sure I get it...what do you love?

Just kidding...this was oh so fun to read!
12/08/09
Yummy!

I can't help myself ... this was a "delicious" poem!

You captured the essence of chocolate.

12/09/09
Oooh, Me too! Me too!! I do SO love chocolate! ^_^ Great use of the repeating line and I'm sure practically every writer can relate to the lure of chocolate at some time or another. Really great use of topic! ^_^
LOL, I LOVE this! Got me wanting a frappuccino though...
Chocolate seems to be a hot topic here at FW for sure. :)
12/09/09
Poetry in chocolate or is it chocolate is pure poetry. I heartily concur! MmmmGood!
12/09/09
Ah, we are soul sisters. The name Godiva makes me weak in the knees...
This was a delicious read!
12/10/09
Very cleverly done! What talent!
06/26/10
I can definitely relate. My two favorite browns: chocolate and brown eyes :) By the way, does it take you very long to write these poems? The clever rhymes seem to just roll into place. I love it!