The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the way you use dialogue to describe another's character. I love the deep symbolism here, and how I can read it more than once, and keep getting more from this.Great message on the "clarity" of forgiveness.
What a lesson here of what damage our tongues can do. Wonderful descriptive writing.
Clear writing with a clear message.
Awesome analogy!
Excellent job with the symbolism of the murky water! A great aha! moment for me.
For fiction not being your favorite, this is excellent! You transported me to their rendezvous in this great lesson of forgive and FORGET. Very good!!
Rich symbolism!! Certainly gives us something to think about.