The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/09
I love the way you use dialogue to describe another's character. I love the deep symbolism here, and how I can read it more than once, and keep getting more from this.Great message on the "clarity" of forgiveness.
12/05/09
What a lesson here of what damage our tongues can do. Wonderful descriptive writing.
12/05/09
Clear writing with a clear message.
12/08/09
Awesome analogy!
12/08/09
Excellent job with the symbolism of the murky water! A great aha! moment for me.
12/08/09
For fiction not being your favorite, this is excellent! You transported me to their rendezvous in this great lesson of forgive and FORGET. Very good!!
12/08/09
Rich symbolism!! Certainly gives us something to think about.