The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so amusing! I laughed at the many plays on words and enjoyed the story thoroughly. Bravo to Mr. Case
Clever & funny. Nice to know Peter's wife's name! :-)
shades of old detective movies. laughed all the way through the story.
How fun! I was smiling all the way. Great "detective" voice.
Sounds like Boggie and Becall, but it's Peter and his wife... very very clever!
I was even hearing the mournful sax playing in the background!
When she said Ms. Eater, I knew something silly was coming.
This is great!
I want to try this kind of writing when I "grow up!"
Wonderful voice of the detective. I believe we have a winner, folks!!
Was this one harvested from a "plant" nursery rhyme? Well-constructed suspense, for my interest never 'peter'ed out even though mention of "Mrs Eater" telegraphed the close. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
This was such fun! Dialog was worded so well, I could hear their voices. Great job!