The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/09
This was so amusing! I laughed at the many plays on words and enjoyed the story thoroughly. Bravo to Mr. Case
Clever & funny. Nice to know Peter's wife's name! :-)
11/28/09
shades of old detective movies. laughed all the way through the story.
11/28/09
How fun! I was smiling all the way. Great "detective" voice.
Sounds like Boggie and Becall, but it's Peter and his wife... very very clever!
I was even hearing the mournful sax playing in the background!
When she said Ms. Eater, I knew something silly was coming.
This is great!
I want to try this kind of writing when I "grow up!"
Wonderful voice of the detective. I believe we have a winner, folks!!
12/01/09
Was this one harvested from a "plant" nursery rhyme? Well-constructed suspense, for my interest never 'peter'ed out even though mention of "Mrs Eater" telegraphed the close. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
03/11/10
This was such fun! Dialog was worded so well, I could hear their voices. Great job!