The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/09
Very original! I love your idea for the topic. I had trouble keeping up with so many characters in such a short piece, but it's well written and kept my interest - and what a wonderful ending. :)
Interesting story.
I was confused over who was who.
I am aware of people who have autism and need that kind of pre-planned structure. I like the way you tied it all together.