The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1097 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
11/28/09
Very moving story. Great pace - flows perfectly through the flashbacks and memories and back to the present. I LOVE the ending.
I loved the ending of the freed feathers! Lovely story.
12/01/09
Wow! this would be a winner if I had my way. Brilliant! Colin
12/01/09
Simply loved this story ... so filled with subtly presented characterization
12/03/09
This was wonderful from beginning to end. Congratulations on your win!
This is absolutely stunning. I was drawn in and held until the end. Congrats on your EC.