The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
You did a great job creating atmosphere in this piece. Felt like I was right there.
12/01/09
A story of reminiscing, woven round a barber's shop and a haircutting job. Very creative. Colin
12/02/09
Wonderful, wonderful story. Superb setting, atmosphere, dialogue.

My only (tiny) nitpick is that the color orange is almost an afterthought here, and other colors would do equally well.

Other than that, this may be one of the best-written pieces I've read this week.