The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/09
Enjoyed your fun orange poem. Cute and naughty!

Colin
I really enjoyed the poetic tale. Fun read. Well done.
12/01/09
Very cute! I tripped a little over the meter in places, but I feel like it added to the realism of the MCs voice.
Very fun!
12/02/09
Your disclaimer at the end really made me grin!
12/02/09
Authenic voice for this little orange monster/princess.

Mona
12/02/09
How cute is THAT! Big time kudos!
12/02/09
Funny, funny, funny. A little girl Dennis the Menace! Totally creative.
12/02/09
I like the footnote!
The voice of your MC reminded me a little bit of "Eloise" from the children's books and movie. A good example of the topic and fun to read. Loved your disclaimer :-)
12/02/09
I know some little princesses like this. Adorable, Chrissy! Nice job.
12/02/09
This gave me a big smile... I especially love the "Daddy's Little Princess" line (that allows her to escape punishment.) :)
Very cute poem. I was grinning all the way through it!
12/03/09
What a rotten child you are.. :-P

A good play on word use though.