The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/05
You made some interesting points, but it might be better if you start at the Beginners' level and work your way up.
08/26/05
Good flow of emotion and leading of the reader. Needs some polishing up in spelling and tightening the 'was' words. Keep it up, you have potential.