The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
Beautiful descriptions and wonderfully rich symbolism. This was a feast for the eyes and mind.
I realy liked the descriptions,I could visualize it all.
I am wondering about the topic-I saw a passing reference to orange, as well as other colors.
I feel like I have read a similar story about stained glass windows-was that also yours?
Beautiful writing.
11/30/09
You created art with your words in your descriptions of the windows. I too feel it is a little weak on topic, even though you zeroed in on orange at the end. I love the symbolism of old age being closest to the altar, like our journey to the end of life bringing us closer to our Heavenly home. This was a delight to read.