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08/22/05
Very powerful!!! Thank you.
08/23/05
The Jews, by the promise of God, have made their homes in a wasteland; and watering it with their sweat and even with their blood, have turned it into a garden. Thank you for sharing this tragic story of one family being uprooted from their God-given home.
It is a sad time in anyone's life to be uprooted from their homeland. It is probably even more frightening for a child. You've told your story well.
Beautiful telling of such a timely issue. Your sensitivity in writing this piece draws a compassion from the reader...would make a good magazine article.
A sweet story of hardship, relationship, and faith. Good job!
08/28/05
Very touching...... Well done. I can almost see the grandmother and little girl with her bag.