The Official Writing Challenge
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Thanks for reminding us to appreciate each day God give us. When Walt left the table, it is a little confusing as to who "sipped" coffee, but that is a minor point. Good writing carried this story along and made it an enjoyable read.
12/01/09
This week our stories are making me smile - all these orange things that are around. Enjoyed!

Colin
12/02/09
I don't know why I didn't see the ending coming, but I didn't, so you gave me a nice morning smile. What fun!
Great ending. After the topic was announced, I was surprised at how much orange I saw every where I went. You noticed, also, and wove it in giving life to the story.
12/02/09
A comfortable slice of a newly appreciated life. I only wish his friends were more open to hearing about it. How sad, but true. I loved this character, and I smiled at the ending. Nice. :)