The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
Your story brought tears to my eyes. Great writing.
11/29/09
Wonderful story! Very well-written, very emotional; I was caught up in this homecoming and delighted with the ending (or should I say "beginning?").
12/01/09
Very powerful depiction of hope mixed with fear, and how grace wins out. Very well drawn emotional profile.
This should rate very highly indeed.