The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
I was sitting in front of a fire-pit just a few hours ago so I appreciate the description of the FIERY, orange sunset. I enjoyed the flow of the poem and the "poetic" prose at the beginning.
12/01/09
Very poignant and magical.

Colin
Beautiful poem with wonder word pictures! Well done!
12/01/09
A beautifully reflective piece (or should that be peace?) on a daily moment that is lost on too many people in life's frantic pace.
12/02/09
What beautiful poetic language you use! You've quickly become one of my all-time favorite FW poets.
Oh my! This leaves me breathless with its beauty! I need to find your FW stash and read away to my heart's content! Big time Kudos on this one!
12/02/09
So well told. Ahh I wish I had this kind of poetry gift.
Keep it coming!
12/02/09
Such beauty in your words. I agree with Jan, you are one of my favorite FW poets. Lovely.