The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Great yellow poem! Well written and well said.
11/21/09
I'm glad they didn't take our sun. The sun (and Son) is precious indeed.
11/22/09
Lovely imagery. Thank you for reminding us of our precious resources.
I can see this as an illustrated book for older children. Well done!
11/25/09
I like the freshness of this entry. Not another like it...that's creative.
As Christians we should treasure God's creation. Puts one to thinking. Good writing.
Mona
Good catch line!

Congratulations on your win!
This is the type of poem that can be read at top speed it flows so easily. But what a pity to do it and miss the message. I love it - fun, and yet serious. Great job Mel :-)
11/26/09
I like a poem that flows smooth and I really enjoyed the "out of the box" take on the topic. great job.