The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Great yellow poem! Well written and well said.
11/21/09
I'm glad they didn't take our sun. The sun (and Son) is precious indeed.
11/22/09
Lovely imagery. Thank you for reminding us of our precious resources.
11/25/09
I can see this as an illustrated book for older children. Well done!
11/25/09
I like the freshness of this entry. Not another like it...that's creative.
As Christians we should treasure God's creation. Puts one to thinking. Good writing.
Mona
11/26/09
Good catch line!

Congratulations on your win!
11/26/09
This is the type of poem that can be read at top speed it flows so easily. But what a pity to do it and miss the message. I love it - fun, and yet serious. Great job Mel :-)
11/26/09
I like a poem that flows smooth and I really enjoyed the "out of the box" take on the topic. great job.