The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
wow! great writing. how often we get out of balance with what really matters in the eyes of our family and God.
11/19/09
Good concept - too bad more people don't act on it when they realize it.
11/24/09
Ahhh... I loved the ending!
I am so glad your MC got his priorities straight. I'm afraid many fathers (and sometimes mothers) don't. This is well written and has a good message, too.
11/24/09
I'm sure God smiles when we do the right thing! I smiled too. Sweet story.
11/25/09
Your story was written as if the first part of the day was cloudy, the middle stormy and the end as sunny as it gets.
Loved it.
Mona
11/26/09
Good for Sonny and good for Samantha. A timely message for today's families. I enjoyed this a lot.