The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
This is a clever little story. So realistic of what sisters lay on each other. We never know what will become of one's treasure, as they say it is trash to others, Loved the descriptions and cheshire cat grins. Those naughty girls!
11/21/09
Hehe I liked this story.

I got a bit confused with Edith and Edna, and am wondering if perhaps the wrong name was used for one line... the line about the "the man was hurting" given as the excuse.

Over all, a great story... I'm wondering the fate of Yellow Vase Jr. ;)
11/24/09
Interesting plot! I think there are heirlooms like that in every family.
Loved the hook in the opening line. Made me want to see why a vase would want to smile. An enjoyable read.