The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! What a contrast between prison cell and what the butterfly evoked in the prisoner's mind. You painted it beautifully.
11/21/09
This is a magnificent story! It is encouraging to be reminded that our God can cause us to persevere in the most terrible testings of our faith! Well done.
11/21/09
Oh wow. Very good. I loved the ending.
11/24/09
I'm so glad you named this powerfully moving piece a simple name, The Yellow Butterfly. It is exact.
Your marvelous writing ability draws the reader into the story and strengthens his faith as you deliver such a beautiful message from God.
Top Notch all the way to EC.

Mona
11/24/09
Beautiful...God does work that way, doesn't He? Just when we feel weakest, He sends someone or something to lift our spirits.
I have goosebumps!

I loved how the sight of the butterfly brought about those vivid images of yellow colored food.
I especially like the part where there are symbolic colors left on the hand, for we know now where the MC will soon be!
Goosebumps!!!
Wow a wonderful look at how God ALWAYS steps in, just in time, to offer us exactly what we need. Very well written!
What a beautiful story of another saint ushered into The Heavenly Throne of God!
I love reading about missionary-of-the-faith stories on how they "earnestly contend for the faith which once once delivered unto the saints." Willing to die for our Lord Jesus!

Very well written. Thank you.
Very stirring. I could visualize the butterfly as a shaft of yellow light penetrating the cell and soul of the prisoner, bringing forth the truth. Well done!
11/25/09
WOW!