The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Excellent work with a very powerful message. Though not my genre, it pulled me in with it's creative approach to the subject.
Well done!
11/19/09
i'm not a poet but i got the message. excellent.
I like your take on the topic. Very nice.
Very clever interpretation of the topic and a lovely poem with a marvellous message. Well done.
11/22/09
Good Job! I like rhyming stories...much better than just words that rhyme. You told a nice story here. This is what I also like to write.
11/24/09
Oh, I liked this. I'm thankful my life is covered in yellow! :)
That was wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it.
Excellent work! The flow and feel glides along smoothly.
And the message is amazingly well executed.
11/25/09
Written from a grateful heart. Very well done and the format is just lovely.
Mona
11/29/09
Nice Poem.