The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/09
Very touching and an emotional ending. I like the yellow star approach to the topic. very nice.
11/21/09
Oh my. The ending on this one really got me. I definitely was not expecting that. Wow. Stories about the Holocaust always fascinate me.
This made me cry. Very creative and touching story.
11/25/09
Excellent writing pulled me into the story and held me to the bitter end. Powerful, on topic, worth telling, great characterization, believable and triumphant.
A winner.

Mona
11/26/09
Wow. Very engaging and powerfully written. You give much depth to your characters. A wonderful read.
Just like the love of Christ!

Congrats on your win.
11/26/09
An inspired - and inspiring - angle on the topic that built curiosity and suspense, until you explained it with a heartbreaking climax. A worthy win.
11/26/09
OH! I really liked this one. I'm so glad to see it on the EC list. Yay. Congrats!
11/28/09
As always -- your writing touches the heart. Sooo excellent!