The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/09
This had a carefree, happy feel to it. Nice.
11/23/09
Very well written; rhyme and rhythm excellent. I really loved reading this poem. A perfect praise to God! Blessings.
11/26/09
Carol this is beautiful writing. Absolutely beautiful. Wish I'd had the time to find it earlier. I feel you knew the Father's heart about yellow. Blessings
01/18/10
You could feel the happiness your yellow poem conveys. Nicely written.

Thank you by the way for your kind words about my poem.
01/29/10
I could feel the warmth of the sun! Wonderful!