The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Love the sweetness of your MC and her relationship with her grandfather. Good job with the topic.
11/20/09
I really enjoyed reading this.
11/21/09
This was so cute!

You might have given a clue that the MC was a girl... I could have missed it. I was picturing a young boy, so the dress part threw me a bit.

Maybe you should ask Crayola to make a muckledunberry crayon. ;) Great story.
11/24/09
Ahhh...*tears* You made me cry. I miss my grandaddy!
11/24/09
I think that's my new favorite color.Loved the story.
11/25/09
Who doesn't love a story about a girl and her grandad? Especially when it's as well done as this one.

mona
Awwwww.... so precious! Little girls love to spin and have their dressing poof out, so I really could picture this.

Condgrats on your win!
This was so beautiful. I'm typing through tears here. I love the little girl's voice - yes, I could hear her. great job Marita.
11/30/09
I'm all choked up... Loved the MC and the lovely relationship that was spelled out in the piece. Great, great job.