The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
This is novel material. Great writing! I felt like I was there. I felt the fear. Excellent.
11/24/09
This had a great flow to it, although I confess to being confused most of the time. One thing that might be a good exercise is to shorten some of your sentences to create a punchier flow to your work.

I agree that this has novel potential - I think with a longer word count, the topic could have been done better justice.
I am reading longer work set in Alaska at the present time. This made me think of that, and I do this has potential for a novel.

Good message.
11/25/09
Great job with dialogue and suspense. Very good entry.

mona