The Official Writing Challenge
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This made me laugh and say "Eww" all at the same time.

"in the winter m’ snow appears t’ be one huge chocolate chip cookie."

Very cute. I enjoyed it a lot.
11/24/09
Loved this. I was right there watching this story unfold, just as if it were being played out in a TV special. Great descriptions and dialogue.
11/24/09
Funny! I liked your accents.
This is so creative! Grandpa and the kids all sound pretty authentic. A wonderful story all around.
This brough back memories of my mom gathering snow for ice cream. It was so good and WHITE! LOL Enjoyed your story very much.
11/25/09
Just full of fun and believable! Good entry.
Mona
A really fun story!
Great story, and you took the dare about yellow snow! Good for you!!!