The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
Wonderful message. Lovely poetry and the story is told so well. I enjoyed it to perfection. Vince.
11/19/09
Love the message, love the poetry and love the heart of the writer.
Just splendid in every way!

Mona
11/21/09
Excellent in every way... the rhyme and rhythm, and especially the wonderful spiritual application! I enjoyed this perfect poem!
What a beautiful and sad story.

Congrats on your win!
11/26/09
A great bridge from humdrum to heartache, that flows into a spiritual application that carries a sense of surprise without being contrived. Excellent work.
11/26/09
Very sweet story mixed in with a wonderful lesson. Congrats on your EC.