The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/09
Nice story. It feels like it's a small piece of a bigger story.
Thank you for this very beautiful story! Your descriptions of love and kindness so moved me. It's what our Heavenly Father would say of us, His children!
Mat. 13:46, "Who, when he had found one pearl of great price, went and sold all that he had, and bought it."
Blessings to you.
This read almost like a fairy tale, with an outstanding message at the end. A very nice illustration of the parable of the pearl.
11/26/09
Nice story Mick... very sweet and tender. I love the way the father shows his adopted daughter her true worth.