The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
I really liked this poem. Each line wanted you to move right into it! A poet you are!
Oh, this brought a tear to my eye. Great writing.
11/25/09
Strong emotional pull from this well-written piece. So very well done. Not a wasted word.
Mona
I did not get it until the second read. So sad, yet so beautiful! Well written.
What a beautiful picture you paint of the innocent play of a young child - and the emotional ending. Great writing!