The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/05
Lovely poem. The words and rhythm just flowed beautifully as you stayed in your "Fountain of Grace."
08/25/05
There is a profound message woven in this poem. The verse flows nicely - great rhythm. Nice job! Blessings, Lynda
08/25/05
I like the progression of I came...I stepped...I stayed.
08/26/05
I like the progression too. Although having grace and cleansing there is still pain. With the staying came the healing. Beautiful!
Absolutely beautiful.Thanks for sharing.
08/27/05
This is very good. Poetry is soooo hard because it has to be perfect. Like delicate lace. Nice message, nice progression. Very good!
08/28/05
Lovely! And your use of italics for emphasis worked well too. Well done.
08/28/05
Very beautiful! I am not very "educated" in the art of poetry - I just know what "feels" good to read - yours was it.