The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
a fresh perspective on faith. great message
11/19/09
Nice flow to your story and a sweet message about faith.

One small typo: street lights? not likes? but I bet you caught that after the fact. :)

good writing!
11/21/09
Well narrated, but something seems to be missing as far as making it clear about little sister. I wasn't expecting her comment to be as well stated as it was.
11/23/09
This is a precious story. The MC's voice seemed a little muddled, and it looked like you had enough words to explore your topic a little more. I had plenty of questions. Overall, though, a sweet story with a beautiful message.