The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/05
Not alone. A reassuring feeling not to be alone. The journal was there for Donald to read - and to change his life. Well done and well written.
08/23/05
Great piece of writing.
08/24/05
Wow! Very well written!
08/25/05
Wonderful story! I really liked the message being brought home without the actual Bible! Very clever. I could feel his anger and frustration as he frantically rummaged through the luggage.
08/25/05
My favorite so far! Thanks for writing it.
08/27/05
Great first chapter, the second could be replacing the suitcases. Great storytelling.
08/27/05
I enjoyed this very much! A great story of scrambled luggage that carried a message of hope to an unsuspecting heart. Well done!
08/28/05
Great writing - I was right there in the hotel room.