The Official Writing Challenge
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Not alone. A reassuring feeling not to be alone. The journal was there for Donald to read - and to change his life. Well done and well written.
Great piece of writing.
Wow! Very well written!
Wonderful story! I really liked the message being brought home without the actual Bible! Very clever. I could feel his anger and frustration as he frantically rummaged through the luggage.
My favorite so far! Thanks for writing it.
Great first chapter, the second could be replacing the suitcases. Great storytelling.
I enjoyed this very much! A great story of scrambled luggage that carried a message of hope to an unsuspecting heart. Well done!
Great writing - I was right there in the hotel room.