The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Really nice piece.
I LOVED THIS STORY VERY MUCH. I KNOW WHEN YOU GET TO HEAVEN YOU WILL SEE LITTLE SOMER AGAIN. THANK YOU FOR SHARING SUCH A LOVING STORY.
12/10/09
Your intro was weakened by "infinity" (limitless) appearing when "affinity" (natural attraction) would have been more accurate, but the rest of your story flows very well towards a strong conclusion.