The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/09
These made me smile, "Gwen, I revere you," "I really like you too Lance. A lot…," and "only to be immediately engulfed in flames. -- “You really did die for her Lance. Well done.” You have quite a sense of humor and wonderful creativity! LOL!
11/16/09
And don't forget "but you do realize that King Art’s her..." Very nicely done. I very much LOL'ed at the reading of this one.
Well done. The humour was great. Good for you!
11/18/09
Fun and fast paced, very nice work. Great work with the dialogue!