The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
This is a fantastic work! The text elegantly conveys the emotions of each character in this Biblical-era piece.

I look forward to more!
Inspired indeed! Very, very good. It ministered well.
Very authentic voice making the story all the more believable. If this is a "new" approach for you, it's working. Not everyone can write historical fiction so well and bring the characters to life.
This story really put humaness to the story of the woman with the unclean issue!
11/18/09
The title pulled me in and the concept was both creative in approach and effective in delivery. It all felt quite real and authentic. Nice job.
11/18/09
love stories featuring biblical characters. very convincing, true to life.
11/18/09
Incredible job! I loved how you weaved this together from beginning to end...awesome!
Wow...Superbly written and extremely creative take on the topic. Well done!