The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/09
This is a very different POV. Very good writing.
I was thinking that this was an unborn sibbling welcoming him home in Heaven. But this ending gave me goosebumps!
I loved reading about the family history. I wondered if it might be a picture of some type. The ending was endearing as I love to read of a "lost sheep" coming home. Nicely done.
11/18/09
Very creative approach for the POV. As I was reading I kept thinking what a marvelous poem this would make :) Great job!
11/18/09
I loved the voice in this one!
11/19/09
This had me on the edge of my seat! Wonderfully written!