The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Fascinating. You've cleverly used the theme to teach an underlying lesson. Nicely done.
11/15/09
I am in awe of the depth of this piece. Gorgeous word selection, without being ostentatious. Superb.
Beautiful. I'll be reading this again to catch all the nuances. Two thumbs up.
Excellent commentary. I'm very impressed. The slow pace was a good thing allowing all of your visions to blend and make sense in our minds. Masterful for sure!
This is profound. What a comentary on some of our churches! Well done!
A beautiful soliloquy, perfectly paced, with a solemn message that needs to be taken to heart.
12/31/09
Blended or bland? A deliciousy bittersweet commentary packed with meaning both obvious and obscured.