The Official Writing Challenge
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I really love your choice of words - so colorful and dynamic! Great poem!
11/17/09


Whew! Your extensive description has me enthralled with the greatest anticipation! The wedding feast...hallelujah! Maranatha!

This is a fabulous poem!! I loved it and felt anticipation rising as I read through all the preparations for the wedding feast, all the time wondering how you were going to bring in the theme of purple. What an ending, and a great picture of that feast to come. It is something I will hold in my heart, like CS Lewis' description of the end of the world in the last book of his Narnia series (sorry can't remember the title), but a picture to keep and treasure. Thank you and well done.
01/21/10
Wow! Fantastic description! You certainly have a way with words. And how you shaped them in, rhyming and fitting, to portray the preparation of the Wedding Feast. I loved your ending. Perfect! Looking forward to being a part of the Marriage Supper of the Lamb...Helen