The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/09
Well now...this was a silly piece of a conversation:) I still need convincing before I'll eat it:)
A successful excerise in dialogue and a cute story to boot. I love purple cabbage when we make cole slaw. Enjoyed the read very much.
Felt like an eavesdropper in a booth in a cafe. The conversations controlling the action, scene and settings.
I also felt like I was listening in on a conversation! This was fun to read!
11/16/09
Fun and realistic. Conversations centered around veggies often take on a humorous tone...and you captured it perfectly.